Storybuilder
Back at Rainingwater, Story Builder was insanely popular and had over 550 comments.
Put simply, in this game we will build a story.
In your comment, you follow on from the previous person’s comment with a “…” and write the next addition to the story, no more than four sentences in length, and end it with “…”
The next person will start their comment with “…” continue the story and end with “…”
This process continues on and on and the story NEVER ENDS.
Rules:
- The story cannot change drastically. It can change part by part, but not drastically.
- No commenting twice in a row. In other words, when you comment, wait for another person to comment before you comment again.
- Only additions to the story can be posted on the page.
- No swearing, etc.
Example:
That’s basically it! Have fun and enjoy building that story!
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Once upon a time, in a land far, far away, lived a very special person. This person was so special that…
…when she walked down the street, a glowing aura pulsated in the air, knocking back anybody that approached and making her generally frightening.
This special person, who incedently was named “Sphyra”, was in fact an alien from planet Bugaboo, who had been sent to Earth to investigate human behavior. The first things she noticed were…
(mmm yes i lovesh this game
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….these humans were insanley unhealthy, and did not keep their planet in good shape, and she lost so much interest in the slobs of Earth she enthusiasticly jumped aboard her spacecraft, which was cleverly hidden as a health bar so that humans would not be attracted to go near it, and headed towards…
(It was fun, Glint, Milo and Burklets)
And went to planet Arenoze. Here, she was on a quest to find somone by the name George. A human who had found this mysterious planet by accidently walking in a Warp Zone.
(Hehe yeah.)
Which was the same as the Wrap Zone, except with a lot less Wraps and slightly more Warp.
Anyway, on Arenoze, she disembarked her spacecraft and began searching for George. It was a difficult task, as the planet was the size of a…
…golf ball. But then again, Sphyra wasn’t large herself. “Those humans love to eat! I know where to look!” she sang while dancing. She headed to the local…
bar. Surprisingly enough, he wasn’t in there.
“Well, I do suppose humans like HUMAN food…” She scanned the area with her eyes to find George. But instead, she found a…
…sealed envelope. As is the alien instinct, she ripped open the envelope with her tongue to reveal…
a little Robo-Dog. She fed it gears, and he instantyly grew. Now, to find George. She then…
(Josh, Ive had this game on my site forever, do I have to delete it now?)
…Ran to the park, thinking george might be there. She had a picture of him, He had brown Curly hair, brown Eyes, and looked to be about 14 years old. At the park, she looked for george everywhere, but Sphyra didnt find George, George found Shpyra. You see, George was also sent on a mission to find her to, because her father wanted her back at the castle so she could take the throne when he died. He searched for Sphyra’s Long, straight, Blonde hair, glistening blue eyes, and … Wings? Yes, Sphyra had wings, and she could fly. But thats beside the point. At the park while Sphyra was wandering around, George came up and grabbed her arm. He took her to…
…the castle, where King Kaphlooey greeted her with a yell and a facefull of spit.
You see, King Kaphlooey was a rather loud person, with rather large features, and an inflamed rash on his nose.
“I completed the mission, father.” she said, batting her eyelashes.
King Kaphlooey let out another yell, which sent Sphyra…
crying. His breath was just repulsive! So, Sphyra threw tic tacs at him. Thinking it was an assult, he threw her into his prision with George.
“Here, let me explain whats been happening..” Started Sphyra…
“No, It’s alright, somebody else explained it to me. I only fainted three times.”
She laughed at this. Then, she spot her Robo Dog! She called for it, but…
…it let out a series of beeps and bops and then exploded in a colourful explosion. She spent the next fifteen seconds mourning the loss of her Robo Dog. Then, after regaining her composure, Sphyra hatched a scheme to escape from jail. Using a roll of masking tape an a rusty pen knife, Sphyra planned to…
pick lock the door using one off Georges hair. The rusty pen knife was simpily to make her look cool. Suddenly, the door swinged open.
“WHOOHOO!” Sphyra cried.
“Ow!” Said George.
They headed outside, only to be confronted by…
…King Kaphlooey’s maid, Miss Mentos. She shrieked because she had never seen a creature as hideous as George before, as she was a robot built out of rusted nails. Sphyra rushed over to calm Miss Mentos down. “It’s alright,” Sphyra said, before…
realizing the maid was trying to destroy her. George grabbed a sharp,pointed broken vase piece and lunged at her with it sticking in front of her. It pierced her…
…in the ear. Next thing you know Sphyra unfolded her wings, grabbed Georges shoulders, and escaped off too…
the next universe. But to do that, they needed the Twilight Gem. So they decicded to go to mars instead.
However, due to inflation, travel to mars would cost several hundered thousand cosmo-dollars. Cosmo dollars were the currency of Bugaboo. The idea had been stolen from Earth, but not from the ordinary dollar. The people of Bugaboo had somehow mistaken tin cans as a currency, and mass-produced them, only to discover that they werent worth much at all. This made even the simplest of tasks worth hundereds of Cosmo dollars.
Anyway, they decided not to go to mars. They returned to planet Earth (which was free, as it had a bus station in northeastern Russia) and traveled to…
…Hawaii. Sphyra was fascinated at the fact that these strange humans would, at the drop of a hat, balance on a piece of wood in the poisonous water, falling over many times, and dance only wearing clothing made of green plants of some sort. “Come on in, the water is fine,” George shouted. But George didn’t know that to the Bugaboo-ans, water was deadly. George jumped out of the water and picked Sphyra up, throwing…
…her in. Unfortunately, Sphyra was allergic to both George’s hands and water. The first didnt matter, as George didn’t use his hands to throw Sphyra in, but at the slightest touch of water, Sphyra begam to itch and scratch her Outer Neurotina (The part of the brain that sticks out of the ear) and her Phillibellum (The scaly bit on her lower back). George, who was a human and thought in human ways, rushed Sphyra to…
help her using a band-aid. He then poured more water down her back, not knowing that water was what caused it in the first place. Suddenly, she looked as pale as a…
…tomato. “Ohh…George,” she gasped, clinging to his shirt. George remembered all the romantic movies that he watched and remembered the kiss of life. Embracing Sphyra in his muscly arms, George brought his face closer to hers and…
did a dance. Sphyra sat there, and slapped her forehead.
Suddenly, the Hawians noticed she looked like an alien. So, she hid behind a bush and used Humanator 300, which made her look like a human. She zapped herself with it, and instantly looked like a human. She also adapted to their features, like swimming in water.
She joined George in the water, and explained what happened. Then, they did what they tried to do before.
…Which was murder exactly two sixteenths of the population of Hawaii. The sat down and contemplated the monumentous task. There had to be at least sixteen of them! So Sphyra decided on a course of action. She would…
use the suns rays to melt them. But George didn’t agree to this plan, and she stopped. Suddenly, the air filled with a light, and then a spaceship sped towards her at…
…7 kilometres an hour. The driver was inexperienced. “Sphyra,” a robotic voice called from inside the machine. “Come back to your planet.” George gasped. He said, “I didn’t know you were an…
robot!”
“I’m not, it’s just a robot pilot!” She said. “But, I don’t want to go home! Its boring, and I can’t bring George because of the fact it’s so hot for human kind that their eyeballs will boil up and explode!”
“Then, I’ll have to FORCE you!” Boomed the robotic voice. Suddenly, the ship transformed, and chased after Sphyra. The ship fired lasers at her, and she ducked. The robot uprooted a tree and threw it a her. She ducked, and it knocked over a gasoline truck. Suddenly, there was a huge explosion that sent George and Sphyra hurtling towards..
…Iceland.
“Welcome to Iceland!” screamed George to Sphyra, who had magically changed into warmer clothes.
“Iceland?” Sphyra asked. “Where’s all the…
Ice?”
George looked around. “Yea, where IS all the ice?” George looked around, to see they were standing on hard rock.
“Oh, there it is. Underneath that fireplace,” Sphyra added, pointing towards a house that said “Fire”.
George let out a muffled…
…muffler. Well, you can’t expect a muffler to be un-muffled, right? Anyway, George put the muffler on to keep warm, and they headed toward the blazing building… (hope i understood your comment
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…which happened to be on fire.
“Mr Narrator,” George interrupted. “Where did you come from?”
Sphyra diverted George’s attention to the…
… big, flying space-elephant that was hovering over their heads. George saw it and screamed. “ITSA GONNA KILL US ALL!” he yelled, but instead, the elephant…
…put out the fire by spitting magical ice lanterns out of its lipstick covered mouth.
Sphyra looked at George. George looked at Sphyra. This was an opportunity they couldn’t resist. On their quest, a magical lipstick-eating elephant would help, wouldn’t it?
George approached the elephant and…
…began trying to communicate with it.
“WEE-ah. COmmeE Eenennn.. PEEEEEEeeeeaacee…” George moaned.
The elephant gave George a look that said “You’re crazy..” and
walkedlumbered away.Meanwhile, Glint found a small…
…opportunity to appear in the story. Glint was, in fact, the star of the past story.
Catapulting from the sky, Glint landed on George’s head.
“Who are you?!?” George screamed.
Sphyra giggled. “That’s…
… My one true love, Glint!” Sphyra exclaimed. “In fact, today we’re planning to get married in a big Las Vegas chapel, and Glinty was wondering if you’d be his best man!” Glint shrugged. “You know what I say to that? …
……I’m a girl, love, and I don’t have any plans to be lez.”
George burst out in laughter. “Haha, you wanted to marry a girl!”
Sphyra, angry, stomped her feet and marched towards a…
Matress store! There were thousands, maybe millions of matresses.
”Aha, I have found my happy place.” Sphyra sighed, and tossed herself onto the matress.
One problem was that…
…George had followed her! He had used his 3-D glasses to track Sphyra’s scent, and eventually found her asleep on a mattress made of nails. Toenails.
“Ewwww!” George shrieked, cracking many a window. His shriek was so shriekishly loud that…
Sphyra woke up and got a glass of ice cold water and poured it down George´s top and he screamed like a little girl then Sphyra went back to sleep and George…
snuck off into a drug house.
“You sell drugs?” He asked.
“Yep” the drug store clerk said.
George pulled out a wad of cash. He slid it to the clerk.
“Thanks” the clerk whispered. Then the wad of cash exploded.
“YOUR GOING TO THE COPS NOW!” Said George.
Unfortunately, George was a pathological liar. He was also rather stupid. Instead of turning the drug store clerk in to the police, he turned him in to a group of…
..nebulae star clusters near the proximity of Betelgeuse. This was achieved by putting Drug Store Clerk into an old 1860′s wine barrel, and putting in with him an Improbability Drive, which would then burst him immediately into the area of Betelgeuse towards the Star Clusters. While the Drug Store Clerk was too busy being frightened to think, the Barrel of Wine thought it pretty rude to send it off into space like that without previous notice. Meanwhile, George….
…ran around in pointless circles.
Pointless.
The pointless circles that George ran in led him smack dab in the middle of an air invasion. The evil…
…Blancmanges of Trral! These Blancmanges were so terribly gruesome that every creature in the Galaxy feared them. They were excellent Air-Space Pilots, and George was such a lovely looking creature that they decided to use their skill to annihilate him. So first they…
…observed him. You see, the Blancmanges of Trral pride themselves on their skill in observation. As they observed George, they observed a slight indentation below his left nostril. The leader of the Blancmanges, Maurice, suggested that they should target this indentation in order to psychologically weaken George. As they holstered their weapons, the rest of the Blancmanges…
then trot of to get some root beer. You see, they had a addiction to root beer, because it made them look tough. No, not planet Earths root beer, they used the strongest Exyder roots to squeeze a foaming substance into whatever. George, wondering what the hell the leader was doing to him, decided to threaten them by breathing fire. You see, this is the first time the Blancmanges of Trral came across this kind of creature, and had no idea what to do. The leader backed off, before hitting the door, knocking it open. The crew of the ship were all sucked out, and George, was sent hurtling out into space. He had no air and then floated in mid-space. Sphyra had planted a GPS tracking device in Georges body while he was sleeping. Her spaceship zoomed to his lifeless body, and then, she let out a long bloodcurdling scream.
George opened his eyes, gasping. “What was that?”
“I’m learning to yodel.”
Suddenly, gleaming lights appeared and circled George. They were chanting. They must have been attracted by Sphyra’s yodelling.
George knew what they were. The…
…Swedish Profers of Older Sweden I ( northern milky way). They loved yodeling, so they walked over to george and….
ate him. This was a traditional ritual, but George burst out of his stomach. Using his powerful cooking skills, he…
…cooked a scrumptious seven course meal using only the finest natural ingredients in Older Sweden I, such as Swed-rocks. The Profers were silenced once more but George’s problems were not over. From the corner of his…